100wc Week #19

We were sitting on the mat our hands were held so tightly I thought my hand was going to break. ” 3rd place goes too…” the relief I felt when we weren’t called up is indescribable, this means we’re one step closer to winning. ” 2nd place goes too..” my heart was  beating out of my chest,  in a matter of seconds we’d find out if our hard work would pay off. ” Fusion All Stars!” I looked around the tears blurring my vision, did I hear him right? ” AND THE WINNER IS…. THE WHITE PATRIOTS!!!!!” all the months we put in definitely paid off!

One thought on “100wc Week #19

  1. Hello Molly,
    You were able to build the tension and excitement in your story by using a count up to first place. Well done.
    As winners, I wonder what the prize was? It must have been something special.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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